November 14th, 2016 at 12:50am
Forever After All - Comments
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I love this so much, it's so cute! :DNovember 13th, 2016 at 07:22pm
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@ laurastephanie
No problemNovember 7th, 2016 at 02:22pm -
@ laurastephanie
ily <3November 7th, 2016 at 12:07am -
@ joelkanitz
thank you x1000000 ❤︎ your comments give me so much confidence! thank you thank you thank you ❤︎❤︎November 6th, 2016 at 11:42pm -
@ lonelyshadow616
Thank you for the advice!November 6th, 2016 at 11:40pm -
I just read it again and I love it sooooooo so much. The wedding scene is definitely my favourite, I think. Just ties it all together, they're adorable. You're gonna end up getting me hooked on royal AUs. Just something so sweet and happy. I feel Jack though, I'd never want to let my mother win by letting her know she was right either omg. Even after the wedding I'd be like, "No, Mother, I don't love him. Shut up. Get away."
PS. The first commenter is entitled to their opinion but I don't think there's an issue of that. Like, granted, no, there wasn't a lot of backstory about Jack and Zack themselves but this particular story doesn't really need it? I think it stands really well the way it is. Your descriptions were lovely.November 6th, 2016 at 11:24pm -
See, my only issue is the amount of writing you did, there's not much detail about the characters. Get into their backstory and it'll help a lot.October 31st, 2016 at 02:09pm
Thank you! That's what I was hoping for!