@ ash.night I'm entertaining a lot of ideas for the second one! I'm not sure at all yet but that's definitely one of the things I've been thinking about!!
@ b6661m That's so sad I was hoping her ability to heal would've come in handy had he reattached her head and given her the antidote but it last it wasn't meant to be.
Sorry, I saw someone recommended your story and I had to let you know, all those symbols need to be taken out of your title.
It's actually in the rules on Mibba (I know, no one ever reads those) but I've been around for a bit of time and I've gotten my fair share of scoldings for improper titles.
The Leto Joker bit can go in your short summary in the Story Editing page. All the > things shouldn't be in the title at all.
It's a bit of a turn off altogether, so taking it off might make it more appealing to readers.
I've seen this same story on Wattpad, down to the character names and all.