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  • Zagury34

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    Okay, you made a big grammatical error:
    "I walked over to my dresser where my phone was at."
    I know I sound like an old lady, but don't ever ever ever do that. Ever. It sounds unprofessional, and kind of hillbilly-y.
    Watch your commas', you need to add them in a bit more.
    Other than that, I like it. :)
    December 24th, 2008 at 08:50pm
  • frivolity

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    love the update
    August 21st, 2008 at 04:17am
  • Acadia.Is.Gone

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    i love the story so far
    you should update
    like very soon
    it would be apreciated
    =D
    July 28th, 2008 at 04:02pm
  • frivolity

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    love it!
    write more!
    July 15th, 2008 at 12:47am
  • if you're a trout

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    MORE, JESS!
    MORE ;D
    July 12th, 2008 at 10:46am
  • Miles of Sea

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    Thanks everyonee ;D
    July 10th, 2008 at 10:20am
  • istaytrue

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    update the rest! :D fo sho!
    tehee.
    June 15th, 2008 at 12:31am
  • KeepThePeace

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    MORREEE JESSSS!! XD
    love it. yuummaaayy.
    JOE IS MINE.
    hahahahahah<33
    June 13th, 2008 at 07:48am
  • Smitten.In.Mittens.

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    S'okay if it's your first. Good start! I like it! More soon please!
    June 11th, 2008 at 01:54am
  • kimberlymarie

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    Ooooh.
    I'm exciteddd to read the restttttt.
    Update soon!?
    =]
    June 10th, 2008 at 06:03am
  • Miles of Sea

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    my storyy.
    June 10th, 2008 at 03:50am
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