Screamed when I saw that this was updated. I tried to pace myself and avoid reading it, but I love this story so much! I can't stay away, this is becoming some kinda dangerous addiction I stg. This chapter made me sad and frustrated. Bless Lynn for letting Jack visit Alex! I'm in total suspense for the next update!! I'm scared to find out why Jeremy was (is, I guess) crying, that can't be good. I'm anxious for how Alex will react to Jack showing up out of no where. I just really really hope there's fluff to some extent, I guess? Hope you're healthy and well! Can't wait to see the next chapter :)))
Damn, trouble at the Gaskarth house!!! I hope there's not some misunderstanding about why Alex got suspended... Also poor Jack for having to deal with all that shit...Btw the cliffy is killing me, but I'll probably still be alive until your next update lol
Cliff hangers leave me so stressed. I want to know why Jeremy was tying but I’m scared at the same time because I know Alex will be really pissed that jack even showed up. I need the next update so bad holy shit. I’m so anxious/ at the same time I want Alex to find out what people said in that class
So I decided to completely reread the series up to this point, and, I don't know why, but it was like reading it for the first time again. I can definitely see a clesr improvement in writing style, for one. These later chapters flow a lot better, but you never went off track or went off plot, which I appreciate. I can honestly say I'm super interested in learning more about Alex's home life, he always seems so emotionless, the bits of interaction he has with his family almost adds a bit of humanity back to him. And this last chapter, oh, so good. I am more than anxious to see what happens next.
@ SporkDude Thank you! I made it known that I love hearing everyones feedback and you always give me such details of what you thought and enjoyed and I LOVE IT. I try to make the content as real as I can with it being fiction so its really cool for you to go through the chapter and feel with Jack and such because that's what I do! I hope you enjoy the next update just as much!