Don't You Dare - Comments

Definitely wasn't expecting all of that to happen holy crap ! Good to see they're both realizing they need each other too, hopefully that means she'll move to Cali with him lol. Totally happy to see she's going to be OK as well! Great updates! Looking forward to more!

Ugh. Adorable.
More soon. Preferably with them fixing everything

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!

Keep going Brian - finally you’ve admitted to yourself what everything be else could see. You love her! But she needs to wake up and hear all this for herself. And thank god for Lauren recognising that he cares. More please

Oh man! Was definitely not expecting that! It was right as she was coming to the possible realization that her trying to be independent in Phoenix wasn't making her happy. So I hope this accident serves as a wake-up call for them. They see how miserable they are without each other. Brian bring up good point about him being gone but maybe he should talk to Val because I know Val wouldn't say she wishes she never met Matt and her planning their wedding around the band schedule is worth it if she gets to have him.

When I imagined you getting Brian and Aubrey back together, this was not what I had in mind lol but yay! Another chapter!

omg this is an AMAZING story please please update soon!!

IS THIS THE ONLY WAY YOU COULD THINK TO GET THEM BACK TOGETHER?!?!
UGH
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
She better be ok.
They better get back together like they should have been the whole time.
If you don't fix this. i might have to decide to dislike you

Oh gosh! He needs to get there quickly, and ZV needs to go too, so he doesn't hurt himself getting to the hospital.

Omg no!!! He better hurry his ass up and get there! You can’t leave us hanging like that boo! And I love you for making me a part of this <3

Loved the Chapter!! I can’t wait for you to update!!

When I said they needed time together in a neutral venue I did not expect a hospital. As sad and worrying as it is - it seems the crisis has cleared both their minds. They need to be together......soon.....like update tonight???

Oh no :( this is so sad!! I'm pretty sure she'll be ok I mean I don't think you'll let her die?? No of course not!!! But it's so upsetting.

I can't wait for the next chapter.. please update again like right NOW haha.

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Haha ahh I LOVE YOU GUYS! I really adore seeing who is frustrated with Brian and who is frustrated with Aubrey and who is frustrated with me!
I so appreciate you guys reading and commenting your thoughts on everything! &*

Oh my godddd! No! This is soo good and I’m so frustrated with the characters! I can’t wait to see more of this, I love your writing

Ugh, Aubrey is so infuriating! I get she is trying to be independent and everything but Brian brought up great points! She could be independent In California too, it just seems like Brian is the only one thinking about their relationship and she knew how much Brian wants her to live in California so her whole daydream was kind of a big tease. Anyways! I loved the chapter regardless haha I love when someone can write a story that gets an emotional reaction out of me

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I get it. And it's not that I don't agree with where you're taking things. It totally makes sense considering how intense their relationship has been from day one. Taking a step back is totally the way to go for both of them, and I'd feel the same way if I was in that situation. But still.... it's sad.

This chapter made me reallt sad.
Yes she was asking what their life would be like if she moved to Huntington beach but he didn't have to react like that. He was such an idiot in this chapter.
Brian is gonna have to make it up to her big style!!

He just had to ruin it. He couldn’t just let her play her little fantasy game he just had to go and run his mouth. Booooooo. Haha but incredible update as always. I hope he can get himself out of this mess <3

Nooooooo.
Are you kidding me.
Nooooooo
Ugh. I am so upset right now. This is not what is supposed to happen at all