From Darkness - Comments

This is the first good thing to come out of being quarantined!

@ cattfeine
Absolutely necessary fake marriage plot.

...omg they gotta share a bed, again. Lol

Well...at least she can remember stuff.

*blinks in oh crap*

Just read the entire series! Please tell me it's going to come back!! It's sooooo good x

I just got done reading all three of these up until the last update. I am addicted. I hope to see the end of this story. I love it. And I find the way you write is easy to read and captivating. Thank you for the wonderful stories :].

Soooo i just read through all of these... Again. Pleeeease tell me there's an update coming soon!!!

Don't stop writing please!!! I love this!!! I hope Jo gets to see Graham again!!

Shiiiiiit, I forgot about Graham too.

Oh, man. This kind of chapters make me sad. Poor Jo, she's so confused and in pain, and ugh.

T, you're making me be angry at Wanda. That's not good. I mean, to the purpose of the story it's perfect, but... my other baby.

And Bucky. Award for the most patience guy ever.

Finally! I liked this chapter. I couldn't stop reading, I needed to know what was going on! Good job Guuurrlrllrlr

favorite line:

“Last time you had both your hands you tried to beat me to death with a stick,”

Before I read, I love the banner. Looks like something from a Bourne movie.

OWWW, poor Bucky. Listening to her saying those things most have been hard on him. Jo been afraid of him... ugh... just uhg.

Did Jo really knew who his father was? or she's confusing him with another person?

IM HERE! IM GOING TO START READING NOW!

It set the mood perfectly. I nervous reading it because I could feel her confusion. It was hard to understand, but thats because it was hard for her too, so kinda put us (readers) in her place. DONT WORRY. I like it. And like you said, the worst part is done, now enjoy it!

That chapter made me so nervous because it was so confusing. It's so hard to write dialogue between people when she can't name them. So no, I totally understand. I was really worried about having a chapter that confusing so early in the story because I was really worried it would throw people off and they wouldn't want to continue reading. So that's why I kept rewriting the intro over and over again because I didn't want it to turn people off by being so confusing. But I just didn't think there was any other way to do it while still keeping it consistent. And making her more coherent during this scene would have taken the story in a different direction than I wanted. So I just tried to make her narrate what was happening in the scene without being able to make sense of it herself.

So yeah, she gets over it a lot quicker than I intended, but that was mostly because it was so hard to write her train of thoughts and keep things interesting and coherent. D: But I think it all works out for the best once we get passed it.

I know what you're thinking, and no. Its not bad. it took me a while, but it was well written. I saw the transition from one scene to another on my head. So that's cool. The dialogues took me longer, but I guess that's just me because Im tired as hell haha and not you.

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It was a weird chapter. It took me a while to focus enough to understard, but makes sense. Her confusion hurts me. My poor baby. She fought until the very end... and damn... she shoot him?! HIM?!

Im in pain. real pain. What are you doing to my baby?

my babies?!

ugh, frickin' hydra and frickin' scarlet witch (before she saw the light)
they shot her in the back- making her shoot her dad..
but.. at least bucky found her.. gah!
can't wait to read more- to see how he'll handle her being in bad condition- not just body, but mentally too..