Jealousy - Comments

I hope you haven't given up on this story. You're amazing and I love your work! <3

Wow - I just read the first story & the second story (while I'm at work whoops) and I love it! thanks so much for sharing this story with us, I can't wait for the next update!!

It's been a while since I commented on any stories but I neeeeeed moooore :(

I seriously cannot wait for your next update, I read the first story and this in one night. I started around 2am and it's now 4:30 in the morning, but I just couldn't stop reading. I've cried and smiled so much these last few hours!!! Please post more!!!

Haha a little sex has her rethinking her whole answer

Gah! This scene is so much like the first time when he took her into a public bathroom and stole her underwear. That was my favorite scene. XD I'm so glad you're back!

In other news, sorry to hear about your boyfriend! I hope you're doing better now.

this is getting good, but I was gonna say the same thing as January. you did say pulled down underwear, but she had on none when he was touching her under the table.

So happy to see an update!!! Love this story!! And I'm SO happy she is moving to California with him!!! Aaaaahhhhh, that's amazing!!!
Sorry to hear about you and your boyfriend. :/ That's quite unfortunate.
Side note: when Noah and Elijah are about to have sex in the bathroom, you say he pulls down her underwear. Earlier though she states she has none on....?
Amazing update regardless and I'm looking for forward to the next one!

Thank you, I love this story!!

Good good good good stuff. I have my theory on who tried to kill her/Elijah but who knows you could pull a fast one on us and make it a huge shocker!!! Can't wait for the next one :)

Love this story! Can't wait to read more! :)

I really like how this chapter was written!!! The flashbacks mixed on with the present was super cool to read!
Thanks for the update!

ahhh I'm so excited the sequel has started!!! I powered through the first one in like a day so I can't wait to keep up with this one!!!

Oooooo I freaking love this so much!!!! Oh my gosh, the ending of that chapter was perfect! Please update again soon!!!

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Hi! Posting where, may I ask? :)

So excited for this to pick up! I've missed these two. Can't wait to see where their story goes.

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAS can't wait for more

You are amazing for posting! XD I had a partially shitty day and this definitely made it better! I love you and your writing! Also, I have a question about the story. Are you ok with me posting it here?

Woot!!! So excited for this story and so glad there's a chapter!!!!

Getting emails saying this is updated yet nothings changed ?