To be honest, all I want to say about your story is , amazing. I love the way you make your reader want more. I felt drawn in so much,that I loved it. I really don't have much to say, just keep going , I can't wait to read more. [ P.S. This has nothing to do with your story or to force you , if you have time, or want to read my own stories.Thank you.]
Currently working on it again, so keep a lookout ;)