Blood Money - Comments

@ amoiramaewho
I'm genuinely thinking of doing a sequel. And I was thinking that too about the courtroom scene. I'll have to see if I can go back and add some stuff.

Noooooo it can't be over ! Ugh. I loved this story, I would have liked a little more drama in the court scene but haha he had his jaw wired shut! Domenic is just too dreamy

@ amoiramaewho
There's more to come, I promise!

I NEED MORE!!! You can't leave me hanging like that

@ AliMeansWings
I defintely must have glanced over it, you mentioned it in chapter 9 that Luca is Gay and everyone accepted him for it.

@ Alice Verney
I haven't really gone into Luca's romantic life, but I think if I do a sequel, I'll go into it more. But yeah, he's definitely gay.

Vinny is efficient man if like him to work for me. But that's cute that Dom doesn't care about his friends being involved in a relationship. I don't know 9f it was me or I didn't read it properly but Luca didn't ping me as gay just metro but I think a reread is in order

@ SabinaTanzola
Don't worry. There will be more of that.

Gah! This chapter was such a tease. At the end, I was totally hoping they were going to have sex.

@ PartsOfLiyah
Thank you so much! Welcome to the party!

Started getting into this quite quickly, looking forward to reading more !

@ Alice Verney
Oh my gosh, thank you so much!! I'm definitely planning on continuing this in a serious. Maybe a trilogy? I'm so glad you stuck with it! Thank you!

Oh my god I wish I found this story when you were first posting it but i'm glad I found it when I did. I'll admit the premise of it at first wasn't the best but as I got into it further oh my god i couldn't read each chapter fast enough. I loved the 20 chapters you have so far the story is very interesting and appealing I can't wait to see what happens next and where you plan to go in further stories. There were times that I spilled a tear or two it was that good or dramatic. I seriously can't wait until the next chapter. I am curious to see how you are going to wrap it up in for more chapters unless the story is going to continue over into other stories.

Okay, some comments are in order for this gem of a story right here as I have finally caught my little booty up to speed.

Chapter 17
Poor, poor Alex. She's such a sweet, bright, bubbly person and it's sad to see how that madman messed with her mind....but, whoa, what a coping mechanism. I'm just glad that Domenic is being an amazing and patient husband, and I just love it when they're together. I pretty much don't want her to go back to school ever, haha.

Chapter 18
Detective Barnes....ahhh, there's only one person that comes to mind when I see that name
Ricky remains a mystery to me. Like, I seriously don't know how to feel about that guy. He just gives off strange vibes, maybe not necessarily psycho kidnapper vibes, but something is definitely up with him. It's nice that Domenic suggested they visit her hometown to just get away from it all. The familiarity and normalcy are probably just what she needs to help her relax.

Chapter 19
Haha, Domenic and Ethan don't sound like they're going to get along too well. But maybe they'll bond later on *fingers crossed for Alex* And then Jon suddenly appears and Ethan totally acts like a bratty little brother LMAO, then Maddie practically spills the beans. Oh, what a hilariously awkward situation. But out of that mini-fiasco, we get a deliciously jealous Domenic, so it's a win. Ricky being shot...absolutely did not see that coming. Now I'm just like: who, what, where, how, and why????? And we're nearing the end???? But...but....I need answers. I need more of Alex and Domenic being all cute. I need adorable baby Gallos!!!!!! Glad the saga will continue!!!! This story is totes awesome!!! <3<3<3

@ SabinaTanzola
Oooh. I hadn't even thought of that!

I finally was able to finish the rest of what you have written so far! I've been so busy with school and work. XD This story is so god and I can't wait for you to post again! <3 And Idk, I almost feel like Ricky may not be as bad as everyone thinks he is. haha. I think we definitely does like her but it seems weird he'd hurt her. I'm thinking the creepy guy from the convention?

@ SabinaTanzola
Oh my gosh, thank you so much for sacrificing your studies for my lil old story! I'm so glad you're enjoying it and I wish you good luck on your exam!

I've been reading this while I should be studying for my exam tomorrow! I'm on chapter 12 and I can't wait to go back to reading it! Lol. I should probably attempt to sleep for at least 3-4 hours. XD This story is so great! Thank you for gracing Mibba with your talents!