Selfish Desire - Comments

Awwwww Jimmy <3

I totally didn’t expect her to end up with Jimmy but I’m really glad she did in the end. It was a really fitting end to this story. I’ve really enjoyed reading it and I hope you write more A7X stories in the future. I will definitely read them! Xxx

Finally Brian knows!

Well shit. Im glad you came clean with Brian. He needed to know the truth. Hopefully everything will come together for Peyton.

Jimmy is awesome <3 I still think Peyton should go an talk to Brian. He has to be hurting so much. He still went through losing a baby, he didn’t know it wasn’t his at the time. AND THEN found out she lied to him the entire time. God, poor Brian. He must be crushed...

If there’s only 2 chapters left, I can’t wait to find out who you’ve got in mind for Peyton to be with. However, that depends on whether you’ve decided to do a sequel or if you’re ending it with this story.

Please update again soon. xxx

I’m not entirely sure who I want Peyton to end up with - Zacky or Brian. However, I hope that whoever she ends up with, she will end up happy. This was such a sad chapter. Brian is miserable, Zacky is miserable, Peyton is miserable and her former best friend Ashley ... she’s just a bitch who’s in league with Gena ... also a bitch. I can’t wait to find out what other drama you have in store so please update again soon xxx

Ashley is such a... And then Zacky! I’ve just caught up on this completely. I think, after everything they’ve been through, losing the baby, Payton should go and speak to Brian. He’s been amazing, and they would be good together. She needs to be honest, and talk things out with him, see if he will forgive her.

I have so many mixed feelings about this. First off I want to punch Ashley myself for what she did lol. Second I want to punch Zack for not believing the baby was his. And third I want to hug Jimmy for being such a sweet friend.

I absolutely love this story so far and I can't wait for more.

Poor Peyton, i feel so bad for Brian and Zack. I cant wait to find out that happens next!

Oh my goodness I’m sucked into this and have to know what happens next this is so good and poor Brian and poor Zacky.

What a horrible way for Brian to find out. He'll need to calm down.

Nooooooo you can’t leave us hanging like that!!

Not one of Zacky's finest moments. Brian's still gonna be heartbroken when he finds out it was a lie

Not one of Zacky's finest moments. Brian's still gonna be heartbroken when he finds out it was a lie

The plot thickens! Poor Brian will get heartbroken!

Please update again soon. Xxx

Holy shit! Wonder if Brian's going to push her into a relationship now that she admitted she was pregnant!

Love this story. Cant wait for update

I wish she didn't do that. It just made things more complicated.

Good old jimmy! I hope everything turns out good in the end. Please update again soon. xxx