The Unforgivable War - Comments

OMG!!!
AMAZING!!
Need I say more...?? O.O

:shock:

that's the end? That was really sad, but romantic.
I really like your writing, the descriptions of the war were really good.
I hope you get an idea for a new story very soon :)

Wow, it was really really great!!I LOVE it!!

The Unforgivable War... *sound effects
What will become of Vincent and William? And will Vincent Ever Find Isie again...?
NANANAAAAAAAA
:D
::cough cough::
sorry....
I'm just excited!!!
Luv it!

I LOVE IT!!! The story makes me want to read more and more! Its getting really intresting and I LOVE IT!!! Your writing is also wonderful!

this story makes me want to read more of it! It's getting really interesting now.

I just luv how you describe things!!
and your choice of vocabulary really suits the era of the story!

that was a good chapter :)
It's really cool that you're updating soon again! Can't wait for the next chapterrrr!

WOW THAT WAS AMAZIN!!!! I LOVE IT!1
AND OFCURSE IT HAD TO BE OF VAMPIRES BECUASE THEY ARE FREAKING AWESOME!! I LOVE SOME OF THE HISTORY BEHIND IT EVEN THOUGH ITS MINIMAL I FRACKEN LOVE IT!!!!

Wondefrull!
Just amazing!
Update...:P?

I liked this chapter, the description of the characters are really good. It's fluently written and again, easy to read but not too easy...sounds weird, but it should tell you that it's just perfectly written, haha.
next chapter soon? :)

finally!
I'm not really good at commenting but I'll try my best ;)
I think your story is really good and original! And your writing is good too, it's easy to understand. I don't know what to say I'm sorry :(
I hope you update soon :)

I love your story!

I just love the originality of it!!
More pleeease!

I Simply adore your style!!!
Awesome work!!!
Morrre!!!MORE MOREE!!!

I freaking love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

Oh my goodness I loved it! They're such a perfect couple, reminds me of Bella and Edward! Good work, keep going, I can't wait for the next chapter :)