January 26th, 2017 at 02:03am
@ butterflywings16
Yeah. I wasn't too sure how to just keep it diary oriented and still get the details I want to get.
I realized I was switching around and wasn't quite sure how to fix it.
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January 26th, 2017 at 01:37am
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I love the idea. I also love the way you wrote it. Making it seem like a diary seems like a great idea. The only problem for me is it's gets confusing on whether she's writing her diary or talking about real life. Like it's happening that moment and she's experiencing it. I do love it though. Sorry if my explanation isn't clear.January 25th, 2017 at 07:09pm
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I read this at night and now I can't sleep :/January 12th, 2017 at 05:49am
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@ Tipsy.
I hopefully will soon! Work has kept me busy sadly. xDJanuary 9th, 2017 at 01:00am -
This is pretty good, and intense so far. It'd be great if you updated soon though!
Haha, jk. January 6th, 2017 at 06:50pm -
@ ShelbyCaelum
Oh! My first comment! Why thank you, thought of the idea while riding home in the dark. :3
I hope I don't disappoint!January 3rd, 2017 at 01:13am -
I love it!! I cannot wait to see what else happens.January 2nd, 2017 at 10:00pm
I totally understand. My advice would be to do parts in diary and the rest in normal tone