Small Doses - Comments

"He loves me. Fuck, he loves me" aren't we all fangirls when it comes about love?

I love, love, love this.
I've been reading for a while, but I'm a remarkably sporadic commenter, so you may not see me again for a while: just remember, I totally love this.
My favourite part was 100% Celeste bonding with Shane about LoL. <3

This story is getting so good. Glad to see you're updating. :)

oh goood so much has happened! i like their slow pace, it's comforting

Love every aspects of what you've written so far ! can't wait for more xxx

" I was growing soft" this could be heaven or hell

@ everdeen
thanks so much for the feedback! I felt the first chapter was rushed too so I toned it back a bit. I'm glad you're enjoying it, means a bunch!!

PS: I also like this idea of them change each other lives, they are so different, yet so similar.

I'm gonna be real honest here. In three chapters your writing got so much better, personally I don't think they have to say everything right away, it's good when they open up in their own time. I hope to read a lot of chapters, so there's no need to rush, a chapter doesn't have to contain a hundred of events to be good, just let it float, capture the moment. I also like the inner thoughts, I think it makes more sense for the reader to know how they feel when they talk to themselves than talking to each other. I like Celeste, she's her own person, no stereotypes. Waiting for a new chapter, thank you for writing :)

Honestly love the inner monologue. Love the nsfw and i love their developing relationship

@ megustajawno
Thanks dude! I'm gonna try and update on wednesdays and mondays

I absolutely love your writing and love the concept behind this. Hope you continue this!