When It Gets Dark Out - Comments

  • Dannichappell

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    Excited to read this story!!! Love me some Norman!!!
    February 7th, 2017 at 08:10pm
  • mgn.

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    i like it! a lot! deffffff keep it up :)
    February 7th, 2017 at 04:45am
  • ImaginationOverload.

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    @ merero
    Great job paying attention though! ;D
    February 7th, 2017 at 01:32am
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    @ ImaginationOverload.
    my bad! hahah
    February 7th, 2017 at 01:30am
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    @ unholy confessions;;
    Thanks so much for your comment! I'm so glad. Since it's such a huge part of me as well as the story, I definitely wanted to get my own feelings about riding across. I'm glad I succeeded!
    February 6th, 2017 at 09:54pm
  • ImaginationOverload.

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    @ merero
    Thanks so much. I typed that chapter in the morning so I was still half asleep! Laurie, on the other hand, was meant to be a separate character who works on the set!
    February 6th, 2017 at 12:56pm
  • mgn.

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    two things i saw- you said Lauren's house was a one story but then you said they kept stumbling into each other trying to make their way downstairs. you also said Laurie instead of Lauren.
    i like this! keep it up :)
    February 6th, 2017 at 12:22pm
  • unholy confessions;;

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    You can definitely feel the emotion through Sawyer!

    I've only been on a horse once in my life haha. I enjoyed it but so far haven't got another chance to.
    February 6th, 2017 at 06:04am
  • unholy confessions;;

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    Loving this so far!
    February 4th, 2017 at 07:28am
  • Loves Light Blue

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    I really enjoy this! Can't wait for more!
    February 4th, 2017 at 05:56am