@ unholy confessions;; Thanks so much for your comment! I'm so glad. Since it's such a huge part of me as well as the story, I definitely wanted to get my own feelings about riding across. I'm glad I succeeded!
@ merero Thanks so much. I typed that chapter in the morning so I was still half asleep! Laurie, on the other hand, was meant to be a separate character who works on the set!
two things i saw- you said Lauren's house was a one story but then you said they kept stumbling into each other trying to make their way downstairs. you also said Laurie instead of Lauren. i like this! keep it up :)