April 9th, 2017 at 05:18pm
This is...truly amazing. The imagery you invoke is so startlingly and jarringly real. I love your description of the chorus of City 990. It's very unique and also brings the sounds to life.
This was a very dramatic beginning and I'm so intrigued to find out more about Sil and the resurrectionist. I love when stories start off exciting and mysterious. This may be a for fun thing but it's still phenomenal.
thank you!