You don't know how happy it makes me to see them have some time together - I love how he is when he is with her, and he make her so confident. Loved to update and eagerly awaiting the next!
Ugh. Knowing the story of her doesn't make me feel any better ahaha. i hope Mel finds the girl she was before, especially hanging out more with John and his friends. The old Mel wouldn't let this chick get to her, and I'm afraid the new Mel will let her cause damage. Loved the insight! Update again soon
@ Twisted;;Symphony I don't know either!!!! Hahaha it can go so many ways honestly, I think I'm going to play with the idea, but maybe I'll stick to my original plans, we'll see what happens!!! Thank you so much! ;)
@ QueenOfTheCool Awww I'm glad you're liking this! Always super excited to see new names in the comments! Welcome, and I hope you stick around for the ride :) Will most likely be posting again on Wednesday!
!!!! HE KNOWS! Hopefully Melody talks to him about Kristina...or doesn't. So much could happen at the moment, I really don't know the best course of action that I want to happen. But this was an amazing scene that really showed the friendship between the friends/band mates. Please update again this week! I can't wait (:
@ Twisted;;Symphony Erika stop making me so emotional (insert endless crying emoji) Yeah I get that too, but it's still my fault because it's so hard for me to write the things that are scattered in my mind, I have so many ideas but when I finally sit down to write, they don't want to come out. Hopefully I can start writing more so I can update more regularly and we can get to the real deal story! Much love for you Erika! You have a lovely day yourself :D
@ LoveAsAlways Totally didn't mean anything on your end ahaha I love the way that it's going. The frustration is more about that I can see how strong their relationship is GOING ago be. I can feel it, I can smell it, I can hear it, I can freaking taste it. It's the part of me that loves to devour novels in one sitting because I can see it all play it in my head like I'm watching it on a screen. It's a good thing. It's what keeps me coming back to this story every time you update. If everything went perfectly all the time, and how the reader wanted things to go, It wouldn't be as a compelling read that it is. They need to work shit out. Melody isn't the same girl that she was in high school. She has a lot of insecurities that are totally reasonable, and though I want her to drop those like its hot and just be with the man, that's only because I'm selfish. I know 100% that I would most likely be acting the same way if I was in this position. I don't think your plan of how things are going are the reason you don't have a big following. I just think that Mibba doesn't have as many people on it as it did a couple of years ago, especially people on it that are into The Maine fan-fox. The only thing that you can do is write for yourself, really, and write for those people that DO follow you and love this story.
Sorry for the massive comment, feeling inspired lol have a good one girly !
@ Twisted;;Symphony You're frustrated?!?! Imagine me, I'm the one that has to freaking write this hahaha I already know the ending so well in my head, honestly would just like to skip to it but I wanted to make this story like a novel, not a simple quick straight to the point short story. I want it to progress in a way that seems more realistic and mature. Rather than them just instantly falling in love and then their relationship being fragile enough that anything can break them, they're 28 they aren't infatuated teens. But I completely get your point and I assume that's why I don't have a big following, I'll try to get it going but that will only mean that the end is closer than you think! But maybe that's what this story needs! Trust me the ending is set, just a matter of time! Thank you for always commenting :)
I love how their relationship is progressing, but a little part of me is frustrated with how slow it is. It's just the part of me that wants everything to be perfect and then to have the perfect life. I mean, I want to be married with kids already (and be 28 so that stuff was actually acceptable), so don't take any offense or stock into my frustration ahaha I trust what you are doing and where you are headed (: loved the update, update again soon!
@ Twisted;;Symphony Kristina will surely be an issue, we'll see how they deal with her. I still haven't written that chapter yet, so we will have to wait and see what she becomes! Thank you so much for taking your time to read this and for commenting! Heart emojis for days! <3