Homepage › Stories › The Story I Wrote While Listening to Castle on the... › Comments

The Story I Wrote While Listening to Castle on the Hill - Comments

  • Ghoul Scouts

    Ghoul Scouts (165)

    :
    Magazine Staff
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    It did feel a bit rushed. But I liked the ideas you put into this story. I liked the theme behind it, and the end was so sweet.
    April 6th, 2017 at 07:50pm
  • Aaargh

    Aaargh (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    Ireland
    @ Rameses' Kitten Hina
    I bad at describing characters but I am planning on writing a proper story and hopefully it will be better. Thanks for your input.
    April 5th, 2017 at 11:42pm
  • wish on a firefly

    wish on a firefly (885)

    :
    NaNoWriMo 2017
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    In all honesty, while i like the idea behind the story, it feels way too rushed. Maybe come up with some characters and flesh out her many adventures?
    April 5th, 2017 at 08:09pm
Homepage › Stories › The Story I Wrote While Listening to Castle on the... › Comments