i am only commenting in hopes that you will continue this because i really wanna know what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
jus to let you know, i comment on every chapter you write. i am a very dedicated writer and know what if feels like when i have about 20 readers every chapter and no comments!
amazing begining! this story will go far! (reminds me of the begining of mine lol prologue thing) XXOOT (kiss kiss hug hug tackle frankie style!) ...D (dodge gee style)
Anyway, HANNAH :D I loved it. But, it made me sad D: Which i guess is good. Because, it had an effect on my emotions... what the fuck and i talking about?! Bahhh! Anyway, i loved it!