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  • shortygirl

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    Please update so

    *And I commented on the wrong one.
    July 6th, 2018 at 10:22pm
  • Pensgirl6687

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    Not trying to be a douche, but why do you have it as Brian hanner and not haner?
    February 8th, 2018 at 07:23am
  • kdennis9

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    I’ve missed a few chapters so I apologize aboxut that, but incredibly written as always. I couldn’t imagine having to say goodbye, I think a lot of people forget that it’s sknething you’d have to do. Can’t wait for the sequel <3
    January 31st, 2018 at 12:48pm
  • AllTimePensFan

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    Wonderful ending! You did a wonderful job. I can’t wait for a sequel!
    January 31st, 2018 at 03:50am
  • Loves Light Blue

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    It’s a fantastic ending! I cant Wait for the sequel!
    January 31st, 2018 at 12:44am
  • kiss my sas

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    What a great ending! I cannot wait for the sequel!! On the edge of my seat already :)
    Thank you for such a great story :)
    January 30th, 2018 at 10:19pm
  • shortygirl

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    I know the sequel will be great. That was probably the hardest thing she ever had to do. Hopefully she keeps sane.
    January 30th, 2018 at 09:50pm
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    I loved this story so much! I'm sure I'll love the sequel just as much!
    January 30th, 2018 at 08:49pm
  • kiss my sas

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    Another wonderful update! I will be sad to see the end of this story but so excited there will be a sequel!!! Yayyyy!!!
    January 28th, 2018 at 01:27am
  • shortygirl

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    He got his queen what she wanted. I'm just worried that Seph is gonna throw herself into work again while he's gone.
    January 28th, 2018 at 12:04am
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    I loved the update!
    January 26th, 2018 at 05:28pm
  • kiss my sas

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    @ TheAntsInvasion
    I don't think you have anything to worry about. Yes, there are transitioning, but that is to be expected. It is great that it was done over time, and there are still throwbacks in there :)
    January 23rd, 2018 at 11:46pm
  • TheAntsInvasion

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    @ kiss my sas
    Awh! Thank you! I'm constantly worrying that they're falling kind of flat, or that the transition from one extreme to the other isn't making sense.
    I love David Bowie too. Once a friend of mine walked in on me singing Starman at the top of my lungs, waving a knife around while I cooked dinner...no regrets.
    January 23rd, 2018 at 03:43pm
  • shortygirl

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    Zacky man seriously! He's always interrupting the good stuff. I'm happy they finally admitted they like each other .
    January 23rd, 2018 at 06:09am
  • kiss my sas

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    So I just binge-read all of this story instead of working - no regrets!

    This is amazing! I love the character development between Seph and Brian, and that she manages to make sure Zacky is always looked after as a best friend.
    I actually started crying at the dedicated song for Jimmy earlier in the story. I am a die hard David Bowie fan (2 memorial tattoos for Bowie, and 1 for Jimmy), so I appreciated this immensely.

    I cannot wait to see where their story goes :)
    January 23rd, 2018 at 05:34am
  • Breepocket

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    Yay! New chapter!!!

    Cannot wait to see the next one. So glad feelings were admitted finally!
    January 22nd, 2018 at 09:47pm
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    I loved the update! that sounds like a great plan!
    January 22nd, 2018 at 07:17pm
  • Loves Light Blue

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    I loved This chapter. I love This story! Lol
    January 17th, 2018 at 04:21am
  • shortygirl

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    I love the thought of Seph hitting Matt with a dildo. Her mother really seems like she wants to fix things.
    January 16th, 2018 at 08:13pm
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    Amazing update. I'm glad Seph's mum tried talking to Brian and being happy for them after she got over the shock :)
    January 16th, 2018 at 06:55pm