Shattered - Comments

  • HisBeautifulDisaster

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    So I keep finding myself checking my mibba to see if you've updated this story at all. I come home from work and I check it, I check in the morning, and sometimes I'll check on my lunch break. When are you updating this lovely story!! :)
    November 9th, 2017 at 05:30am
  • HisBeautifulDisaster

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    The story has the potential to be a great story! It almost reminds me of my own story that I wrote years ago. I would love to read more of it, if you need any help with ideas or just wanna run something off of me you can contact me :) Smile
    November 4th, 2017 at 01:54am
  • Delta22

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    This chapter had me in tears. You’ve done wonderfully in taking a difficult subject and conveying it believably and respectfully. This was a heartbreaking chapter to read, and I’m sure it was difficult to write. Please update soon!
    November 1st, 2017 at 09:07pm
  • Delta22

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    I loved the two updates! Don’t stop writing, it’s too good to stop! Please update soon!
    October 31st, 2017 at 02:05am
  • The Color Abi

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    Oh my, I'm getting quite into this. Please, update again soon!
    October 4th, 2017 at 10:54pm
  • Delta22

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    This is so good! I love your writing style and the depth you've given your characters, especially Evie. I need to read more like yesterday! Please update soon!
    October 1st, 2017 at 11:41pm