Running From Innocence - Comments

@ ugly lights
it'll be crazy for sure so i'm happy you're excited! quentin is jealous of anyone lydia gets with, which was evident from the very first chapter, but he never does anything about it. mostly because lydia won't let him. thanks for reading!

can't wait to see what happens next! Quentin seems to be very jealous of what Ryder and Lydia seem to have. i hope to see more between those two!

@ Ghoul Scouts
ahhh first off, thank you! glad you're liking it. the layout is one i got from the layout section, but i do love it as well! quentin is just pure and no one deserves him, definitely not lydia. and you're right. lydia is a mess. she's manipulative but also charming in the sense that she knows how to get people to like her if she really wants. my chapters are pre-outlined. each of them have about 3-4 scenes. what's funny is my usual stories are a good 4-9k words long, but this was like 3k? so i'm shocked you think it's long. maybe it's a mibba thing?

thank you so much for your kind words! this story is meant to be indulgent just to get something written. and i was inspired by the song "girls my age" so i just went with it. :)

Very good story so far. The layout is beautiful by the way.
I really enjoyed Quentin's character. He seems so sweet and a really good friend. Too good of a friend for Lydia if you ask me. The vibes I get from Lydia is that she is manipulative, but very socially intelligent at the same time.
I felt like this chapter was a bit too long though. I felt like it could of been broken up a bit with other chapters, but that is just me.

It was still amazingly written. You described the perfect high school party, and just the whole high school vibes. That sex scene was so steamy!
Overall, I am looking forward to see where you take this. Well done!