February 22nd, 2018 at 01:44am
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I feel really bad for Roman having to deal with all that, especially when he didn't do anything wrong. He had to deal with his wife cheating on him the night of their wedding, and deal with constant arguments between them which probably wasn't easy on him. I am wondering how he's not innocent in all of this, though. Did he cheat too? You've definitely piqued my interest.
One of the things that's bothering me about this story is the fact that you made it to where Joelle didn't know why everything had ended the way it did, but then at the end, you made it to where she slept with someone else the night of their wedding. I'm not sure if that was an error or if she genuinely thought that that didn't matter.
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I was just as confused as Roman when Joelle suddenly walked out, especially because they seemed to be having a really great time and suddenly she wasn't having it. I wish Roman would've seen the red flags before he got into a relationship with her because she really doesn't seem like a good person.
I'm enjoying this so far!
I read the previous comments and I’m guessing you are rewriting this. I like it so far, it was such a relatable chapter and then BAM! A pregnancy lol I can’t wait for more!