plot i loooooooved it! i giggled through most parts, ahaha. things moved quickly and i know it's because you wanted to show beginning, middle and end within two chapters, but i really wished this had been an actual story! i certainly would've kept up with it. your vivid descriptions make it so easy for me to picture everything in mind head.
characters i'm in love with Austin and i want him as a fake boyfriend too! i love his bad-boy-slash-goodhearted demeanour. Lena is also a great character who is unlike most girls in other stories who aren't brave enough to be blunt with their thoughts and feelings. again, i wished this story were longer so the characters could develop!
overall i honestly felt as though i was reading a chapter of a published book. your writing style perfectly fit the plot, albeit the rush between events. amazing!
so adorable!
plot
i loooooooved it! i giggled through most parts, ahaha. things moved quickly and i know it's because you wanted to show beginning, middle and end within two chapters, but i really wished this had been an actual story! i certainly would've kept up with it. your vivid descriptions make it so easy for me to picture everything in mind head.
characters
i'm in love with Austin and i want him as a fake boyfriend too! i love his bad-boy-slash-goodhearted demeanour. Lena is also a great character who is unlike most girls in other stories who aren't brave enough to be blunt with their thoughts and feelings. again, i wished this story were longer so the characters could develop!
overall
i honestly felt as though i was reading a chapter of a published book. your writing style perfectly fit the plot, albeit the rush between events. amazing!