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  • fatehathnomercy

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    I enjoyed this first part. The only annoyance I found, was that you kept referring to everyone as their descriptions.
    December 6th, 2017 at 08:10am
  • pennycausesdread

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    Well, that was a total plot change. Holy hell....hope she's ok
    July 1st, 2017 at 05:55am
  • mdcustard

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    WTF? Was not expecting that twist - if it was Jay then I wouldn't want to be him when the rest of the band and Brian get to him
    June 30th, 2017 at 07:22am
  • LiveLoveLaugh781

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    Just found your story and I'm totally hooked! I read all of it in one go! :) Love the characterization and all of the individual relationships, even the complex one with Finn & Matt. Brian & Finn are so fun and adorable in all the scenes you write! I'm seriously enjoying this and can't wait for more!
    June 20th, 2017 at 06:48am
  • Loves Light Blue

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    Love it. Can't wait to see how the rest of the tour goes!
    June 13th, 2017 at 04:29am
  • Poison.Inke

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    Fantastic! You're instantly drawn in from the first chapter. I can't wait to read more!
    June 9th, 2017 at 10:53pm
  • mdcustard

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    This is going to be interesting - sharing a stage will up the sexual tension
    June 9th, 2017 at 08:22am
  • joy1979

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    Uh oh... what's she gonna find out?? Update soon please
    June 8th, 2017 at 03:09am
  • mdcustard

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    Aww they are so cute together when they're not letting their stage personalities take over
    June 7th, 2017 at 09:42pm
  • Loves Light Blue

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    Just found this. Love it!
    June 7th, 2017 at 03:53am
  • Loves Light Blue

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    Just found this. Love it!
    June 7th, 2017 at 03:53am
  • pennycausesdread

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    Great story!
    June 4th, 2017 at 06:31am
  • Hazzie

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    I actually love that story !
    And I wanna read more. :) xo
    June 3rd, 2017 at 05:22pm
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