Dirty Laundry - Comments

@ joelkanitz
Thanks I was actually thinking about submitting it! I wanna get a few more chapters in tho before I do

@ something-personal
Poor Jack! At least he ain't out there cheating on her smh alex.

Also I saw you have another fic with these characters called Void and I just wanted to say if you felt like submitting that to alltimefanfiction (and any other ATL fics you have), you're more than welcome to! It might pull in some new readers for you and we're always looking to expand our tags. :)

@ joelkanitz
Thanks so much for the feedback! And yes, Jack does kinda have a crush on Lennon, but don't tell Alex ;)

Hey! I'm Eve from alltimefanfiction, I'm reading the contest entries!

I liked your incorporation of the song itself in this. I was surprised to read that Lennon had an ex-husband, and as soon as Jack mentioned a party, I wondered if it was his... and it was, of course, and I think that was a cool twist! Alex saving her was just the thing they needed to be able to talk; I hope they called the police on Josh's ass lmfao. Jack's little crush on Lennon was cute too (I assume that's what you were implying).

This was a really strong entry, thank-you for entering our contest!

No problem. :D
And oh, gotcha, that's what I was thinking but wasn't sure. I'm interested in seeing what you cook up in Void then. :)
:D

@ Nanook
Omg hey girl! I thought i recognized your username haha. Thanks so much for reading, and yeah this is just a side project im doing for a tumblr contest. I just used the same characters because i love them so much! Though theyre not exactly the same, i pictured Lennon a little differently in this story just to match the theme a bit more.
The idea of alex cheating on lennon was actually going to be a future chapter, but i dont know if ill still use it now that ive made this xD. And Lennon in "Void" doesnt actually have the ex-husband and all BUT she definetly has a past :o.
Thanks so much for your feedback tho! You're so nice! <3

OMG. *Heart Eyes emoji* The song definitely goes well with this! Great job!
Yes, I'm stalking your stories on here now, lol.
Is this a preview of what's to come in Void? :O Or just a side-project with the same characters? Hmm...
But either way, great job with this! Very well-written, heartfelt, heartbreaking, believable. Really enjoyed it. <3