Fallen - Comments

yaaaaaay , me liking this update, woman! :)
Hopefully she won't take another step backward.
Glad to know things are a bit less awkward , though.
I'm glad you updated so quickly, I was so impatient as to what was going to happen now that they'd slept together!
Can't wait to read more. :) xo

yaaaaaay , me liking this update, woman! :)
Hopefully she won't take another step backward.
Glad to know things are a bit less awkward , though.
I'm glad you updated so quickly, I was so impatient as to what was going to happen now that they'd slept together!
Can't wait to read more. :) xo

*fans self*

In all seriousness though, I did do a little happy dance. I thought Liv and Matt were going to dance around each other for a little longer, so this chapter was a very pleasant surprise! I'm really worried about the rumor the other moms told Liv though, because they didn't even get to really enjoy the afterglow. I hope Liv talks to Val soon so that everything can be cleared up. (I've still got my fingers crossed and am hoping that Kennedy's a liar.) Looking forward to the next update!

Poor thing .... Hopefully the rumors are just some made up stories! Finally some actions between these two; but she's got to talk to him though. I can't wait to read more! xo

I'm hoping that the rumours aren't true and that her and Matt can have something strong between them. Please update again soon. Xxx

Uh oh...I'm really hoping that Kennedy spun some kind of crazy story because Matt turned her down or something, because I really like how Liv and Matt are together. If what the other moms told her is true, I've got a feeling that the romance might be put on hold for a little bit. Despite that worry, I still loved this chapter! I've always loved gossiping moms. Probably because I come from a large family of strong women that like to gossip? Either way, it was fun to see Liv interacting with some of the other moms! I love Val, she's the best, but I think having some more friends would be good for Liv.

Maybe Matt treated Kennedy like that cos she was so clingy.

Please update again soon. Xxx

Awwww they're so cute together! Please update again soon. Xxx

AAAAAAAARGH!!!!

The date was so perfect! It had everything a first date needs! Light teasing, lots of laughter, some truths...yep, it was perfect! Also, I think I made a sound that only dogs can hear when Val showed up. lol. I knew she'd be a big supporter! And I loved the way you mentioned the missing scenes from the last chapter. It definitely kept me laughing. I can't wait to see what you do next!

Ugh I'm dying here. I'm too impatient I want the entire story now

I love this story so much! Can't get over it!! I'm looking forward to hearing how the end of their night goes :)

I rather enjoy the slow build-up. The anticipation in a good romance is so exciting! I also agree with a comment below in regards to telling Val about the date and having her be a huge supporter of their relationship. After all, she started this in the first place!

Love this! Can't wait to see what his plans are for the date! Update asap! :)

I love seeing Matt so domestic! It's insanely attractive for some reason. lol. I also really like how Matt and Liv can unwind around each other and just be themselves. Hmm, I want Liv to spend the night, mostly because I think she'd be a little embarrassed the next morning about swimming nearly naked with Matt while she was tipsy. And they have to tell Val! I feel like Val will be their biggest supporter, and I really want her to say something along the lines of "I told you so!" before helping Liv get ready for a date with her ex husband. Whatever you decide to do though, I'm sure I'll love it!

Live should deffo stay and I hope you can update again soon. Xxx

I am obsessed. And I'm in love with this.

I hope the next chapter comes soon!

This is so adorable!!!

I don't even care if this is the slowest burn to ever burn, because I could read chapter after chapter of their interactions. Liv and Matt are just so sweet together, it seems natural between them and not forced. And the kids? Carson and Cash are the cutest! Your writing is so realistic, them taking their time and slowly getting to know each other, and I can't wait to see what happens next!

I can't wait till they get together properly. Please update again soon. Xxx

Looooooove the story! The bond between these two is just so nice. I hope it will become something more! :)
Sorry I don't comment alot, I'm so busy with work.
I promise to change that in the next chapters. :)
Nice update and I can't wait to read more! xo

I love this story! It's so cute I can't wait to read more.

This story is cute! I love that it's realistic and not them rushing into a relationship.