I'm here judging for Keep the Music Short and Sweet.
First off, I'm terribly sorry for how late this comment is.
Supercut is one of my favourite songs off of Melodrama, so I was really excited when you chose it. I think this story fit the song really well, it had the same feeling of this is what we had and now it's gone.
I really enjoyed the contrast between the first and second paragraph. It almost felt like there was color and happiness in the first paragraph and the second paragraph was dull and grey. It was a really great contrast between the two parts and I thought it worked really well.
Also I appreciate that you made this exactly 100 words. I know how insanely difficult that is, so great job with that
I really enjoyed reading this, thanks for entering!
First off, I'm terribly sorry for how late this comment is.
Supercut is one of my favourite songs off of Melodrama, so I was really excited when you chose it. I think this story fit the song really well, it had the same feeling of this is what we had and now it's gone.
I really enjoyed the contrast between the first and second paragraph. It almost felt like there was color and happiness in the first paragraph and the second paragraph was dull and grey. It was a really great contrast between the two parts and I thought it worked really well.
Also I appreciate that you made this exactly 100 words. I know how insanely difficult that is, so great job with that
I really enjoyed reading this, thanks for entering!