Wake me up when September ends - Comments

Apocalyptic faith (100)

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I Liked your story but i think more description would be nice and make it alot better. Maybe you should re-write it, i am doing it to mine and my comments are alot better than before :-)
Anyway i loved it, good.

August 8th, 2007 at 10:40pm

Evil Genius (100)

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i really like your story, i think you could get it published if thats what you want, but you need a bit more attention to spelling and grammar. also, before and after the flashbacks, you dont need to write "flashback" or "end of flashback", it just makes it look a bit unprofessional; the audience will figure it out without them. really, good start though, keep updating!!!

April 20th, 2007 at 06:28pm

mini_spork (100)

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it's so good!!! continue updating.
I hope mikey and maddie get together!!!

April 10th, 2007 at 02:04am

XxI'mNotOkayxX (100)

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Hey! I really liked it! Write more babe! lol!

April 10th, 2007 at 01:16am

CutUrThroat2156 (100)

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niceeee update soon

April 9th, 2007 at 12:28am

ImFallingFast. (100)

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this is awesome leoni! its so full of pain n emotion.... wel not really pain but... u know me.... n wat i mean about stuff.... so..... cant wait for mor!
Ale[x]is

April 7th, 2007 at 09:12pm