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Amazing update can't wait for more!

I don't mind it to be honest and it's either viral or she's pregnant with a valo baby

@ Alice Verney
Lol I was kind of in a bad mood. I made him a lot more dickish than what he should have been but I was trying to make it to where he was kinda fed up with Ville as well.

Go willow and Jesse valo is really a dick so far

Okay that's not where I was expecting it to go I dunno why but I was expecting her and Johnny to be a thing previously not an abusive ex though that's potentially a good way to steer her journey when it comes to picking whoever in the end though with the way that Ville is acting atm I'm team Johnny

I love this!

Interesting tidbit I'm curious to know who the gentlemen is

They are coming to see her arent they and knixville is probably there for the ride maybe?

@ Alice Verney
I'll have to check it out. Sometimes I miss things or add things that don't make sense. I forget that I jump around a lot.

Yep i'm liking it already and go wherever your muse takes you when it concerns knoxville and valo. Though I spotted a few small errors in the first or second chapter nothing bit but it was good.

I really love this, and can't wait to see more!

Looking forward to seeing where this will go! :)