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Wow, for something so short this sure packs a punch, the power behind the words radiates until the end and something about it although sad is incredibly beautiful.

Great job!

This was gorgeous.

The whole idea is really powerful -- the idea of telling yourself that tomorrow it'll all be okay, but it never really is. It happens so often and it's such a relatable thing, and you wrote it so wonderfully. The repeating tomorrow to break up each little bit of the story worked really well to tie everything together but still allow you to break up the story a bit. I always find that difficult when I write drabbles, but you did it really well here.

Your descriptions were beautiful and flowed together so effortlessly. I really enjoyed reading this, amazing job.

Ugh, you are just breaking my heart. You write so beautifully!
This piece really struck hard and it is so emotionally moving. You gave one word so much power, so much so that in some ways the idea of "tomorrow" became the main character! And you did this with just 104 words. What. That's powerful. You are literally a Wizard of Words.

Here, take another recommendation!

I think this is incredibly powerful. A lot of relationships revolve on this idea / concept of a forgotten tomorrow and it's heartbreaking, really -- eventually one will lose faith in the fact that this tomorrow never comes, and it turns into an unrelenting barrier between two people who probably love each other very much. I think it can also be a very powerful metaphor for people who are struggling with inner demons, too -- this idea that they do believe that perhaps tomorrow will be better, but it never is. It's a very strong thing to write about and I think here you've managed to execute it in such a way that brings the message across in an effortlessly beautiful way. Your writing is stunning, and everything flows on perfectly from the sentence before. Amazing.