Keep on Haunting - Comments

  • eraserhead.

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    @ aliens.
    Ah, thank you!

    I would really love to turn this into something more. I’ve dabbled in it a little more whenever time has permitted, but we’ll see. I’m just glad this contest gave me the push I needed to start it!
    September 27th, 2017 at 05:01am
  • hangsang.

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    I absolutely loved this! Oran is so haunting heh and you can tell just how desperate he is to get Quinn, even going so far as to try and convince her to leave Liam.

    I do love how you set this up with Quinn and Oran knowing one another in past lives and how she's an old soul. I am wondering if she's always been a witch, though.

    The way you ended the chapter really made me want to read more! I understand if you keep this as a one-shot, but damn, I'd love to read more of this!! I'd love to see the flashbacks and how things used to be with Oran and Charlotte.

    Great, great job!
    September 26th, 2017 at 07:21pm