I really enjoyed reading this, Freddie seems super sweet and I like that they didn't actually go together.
There were a few small errors that caught my eye as I was reading, but nothing that stopped me in my flow.The only other thing is the lack of comma's (but I'm not very good with punctuation, so it may just be me)
There were a few small errors that caught my eye as I was reading, but nothing that stopped me in my flow.The only other thing is the lack of comma's (but I'm not very good with punctuation, so it may just be me)
Overall it was too the point and a great read :)