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  • kitten031333

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    @ vacant eyes.
    Thank you so much for all the tips! I started another story also. If you want to check that out too <3 <3
    September 19th, 2017 at 05:56am
  • cruciatus.

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    I think the idea behind this story could be a really good one! A couple bits of advice would be to focus on capitalization of names and separation of paragraphs. I always love seeing ‘first stories’ because I remember when I started writing, and it ended up being the best thing that ever happened to me! Keep writing!
    September 13th, 2017 at 05:39pm
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