I love the way you opened this up! It's a good hook that really pulled me in and I appreciate that so much.
Aw, I feel so bad for little Michael. While things are going to turn dark, it's good that he was able to get a friend for at least a little while. I'm sure that helped him quite a bit while dealing with the neglect from his family.
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The witch took advantage of a young man’s wording and created Charlie in almost human form. Charlie had no finger prints, no DNA, no need for eating he looked human but he was anything but. He was an entity of dark magic. A nightmare come to life but nobody would know that not yet.
I love this little bit of description you put in. It's so raw and real, and I love it. I feel bad for Michael being used like that, though. Silly witch.
WHAT. Charlie killed Michael? The poor thing omfg. I definitely did not see that twist coming!
The questions you posed at the end are the ones I had as well. I'm so curious to know what happens and I'm excited for updates!
Aw, I feel so bad for little Michael. While things are going to turn dark, it's good that he was able to get a friend for at least a little while. I'm sure that helped him quite a bit while dealing with the neglect from his family.I love this little bit of description you put in. It's so raw and real, and I love it. I feel bad for Michael being used like that, though. Silly witch.
WHAT. Charlie killed Michael? The poor thing omfg. I definitely did not see that twist coming!
The questions you posed at the end are the ones I had as well. I'm so curious to know what happens and I'm excited for updates!