Separated by Love - Comments

@ Isabellevonhuethen
Yeah that's always bugged me in stories, I wanted to try and make something that's at least half realistic. It's obviously cliched as heck, but I didn't want it to be over the top. I'll definitely try to keep updates frequent, although from november 1st to the 15th they'll be quite slow because that's my vce exam period :) Thanks for reading xx

I love that the bullying isn't so over the top like in other stories where people are beat into a pulp like everyday. I don't know if that happens irl in some schools. I have never heard of that. I like the story and hope you can keep updating. All the best for your HSC.

@ Taya.mjpg
No absolutely not, I'll take any constructive criticism that I can get! Thank you again :)

@ zemusez
I hope you didn't find that offensive, I really like what you're doing with the story

@ Taya.mjpg
Yeah, my only issue is I literally don't have a plan for where I want it to go, haha. I'm just writing whenever I get an urge to really! So my chapters really depend on what I'm able to write. For example, chapter 2 ended the way it did because I had another scene I wanted but I didn't know how to fit it on the end of the chapter nicely, so I'm just going to start it in chapter 3

If you want to keep it in chapters but think it's a bad idea you could even increase the chapter length and make the number of chapters really small, like 5-8 : ') I've been seeing a lot of people do that in other fandoms, so I thought I'd recommend it. This story is great and I love what you're doing with having alex as a bully. Can't wait for mkre