The Gift. - Comments

@ DelZen
Thank you very much for the lovely comment :) Maddie loves doves, and Aurora was her breakthrough to help her overcome her doubts in taking her to give the present to her parents. Hearing Bruce and Dick argue was what was giving her second thoughts but doves in my opinion, are like magical creatures that help you change your mind to show you how much it takes to complete that type of goal and what it takes to do them :)

Someday Soon was just a little one shot but I do plan of making a chapter story explaining about her past. :) thank you once again for taking the time to read.

Wow, I am glad I actually read your story. It's beautiful how you create a story in a adult world from a little girl point of view. The dove part was particularly gorgeous imagination. Though it's weird how you decide to bring things back to reality I thought you didn't have to do that, I know you had a reason for doing so. Can I say it will be awesome if you can continue this story or maybe bring Maddie into Someday soon. I love the fantasy going on here.