Nature - Comments

@ vampiric control.
Thank you :)

I'm definitely Shannon any time I have to do any type of physical activity.

This was such a nice, simple story. I liked how it was just two best friends going for a hike and getting away from the world for a while. No hidden meaning, no over the top descriptions, just the simplicity of unplugging from life and going to enjoy a nice view. It's really refreshing to read stories like this every so often. It seems like they don't pop up too terribly much so it was nice.

I also liked the bits of comedy you put into it. It really helped bring the story to life, especially because drabbles can sometimes fall short of emotion, depending on what you're writing about.

Nice job!

@ Ghoul Scouts
Thanks chick

I enjoyed the comedy you put in this story. I can definitely relate being dramatic when it comes to exercise. This was a very relaxing short piece to read. I can relate on escaping in nature, and having favorite spots to go to.
Well done Mandy.