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  • ivylyn

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    The chemistry scene was too funny! Not sure what I want to happen but I love reading about how their own chemstry builds. The little antics between them are too funny
    February 3rd, 2018 at 03:09am
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    Loved the update! I like how Brian and Olivia still do get along it does make it interesting for Jade
    February 2nd, 2018 at 11:16pm
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    Thank you guys! You are too sweet! ❤️❤️❤️
    February 2nd, 2018 at 10:44pm
  • shortygirl

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    I'm really surprised her mother didn't freak out. Happy Birthday
    February 2nd, 2018 at 09:20pm
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    Loved the update! Happy late birthday :) I'm so glad that her parents are giving Brian a chance :D
    February 2nd, 2018 at 03:55pm
  • shortygirl

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    They fell asleep on the bed together or there having sex.
    January 29th, 2018 at 02:44am
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    I really can't wait to see what happens next! Loved the update :D
    January 29th, 2018 at 02:10am
  • ivylyn

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    I can’t wait to see her parents reactions play out!

    Also, I’m so sorry to hear about your father. I hope something good happens. Sending prayers to you and your family
    January 29th, 2018 at 01:23am
  • AJ9

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    This was really great! I’m loving the dynamic of the whole band.

    If you’re struggling have you thought about maybe doing different POV’s? Maybe you could write a chapter or two from her parents POV?

    I’m sorry to hear about your dad. Take as much time as you need. Xxx
    January 25th, 2018 at 11:49pm
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    Loved the update! I feel like it could be interesting for her parents to accidentally walk in on the two of them together. Take as much time as you need
    January 25th, 2018 at 10:30pm
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    Loved the update! Jimmy's phone call to Brian was amazing XD
    January 25th, 2018 at 07:18pm
  • AJ9

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    My God this gets better each time!! I can’t wait for more of this. Please update again soon. xxx
    January 25th, 2018 at 07:08pm
  • Loves Light Blue

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    I cant Believe he went and talked to her parents alone! That’s a big deal haha I cant Wait for the next!
    January 25th, 2018 at 12:42pm
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    I’m so glad that he managed to talk to them and that they’re okay with him and Jade bring together! I can’t wait for the next chapter
    January 25th, 2018 at 10:53am
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    I don’t know what he should do but I can’t wait to find out. Please update again soon. xxx!!!
    January 24th, 2018 at 11:37pm
  • shortygirl

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    I can understand her parents wanting what's best for her but they handled it horribly. There going at it the wrong way. Jade is only going to resent them if they continue down this path. Her parents were probably together when they were in high school.

    Michelle and Zacky? I thought it be Johnny.
    January 24th, 2018 at 08:25pm
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    I loved all the updates.

    Her parents were a little harsh telling her that she didn't know what love was or that Brian is going to stop her from getting in the Yale like they want her to.

    Brian's mom is such a sweetheart. I'm glad you've included her so much :)

    Them both freaking out about Brian saying 'I love you' is super cute!

    Jimmy's character is just perfect!

    I do hope that Brian does go to Jade's parents to talk to them!

    I can't wait for the next update!
    January 24th, 2018 at 07:14pm
  • Loves Light Blue

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    Awe so sweet of Brian’s mom!!! And I cant Believe he said it first! I wonder When jade will say it?!
    January 24th, 2018 at 05:12pm
  • Loves Light Blue

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    So sweet! I hope Jade isn’t totally scared away by Brian!
    January 24th, 2018 at 05:11pm
  • helena_88

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    Jimmy and Olivia- I must say that I hoped that they would go to prom together, but did not think it would happen like that tehe
    Zacky and Michelle?? now there's a curveball.. I thought she and Johnny had a little something going, they just seemed so cute together all the time.. dunno how I feel about that couple yet though.. haha..
    Whoopidoo, they ''went all the way''.. aawe Cute
    Love that she's started thinking more about what SHE wants to do and not what her parents wants her to do..
    But goddamn they are a mean bunch when they wanna.. trying to force her to break up with Brian and all that..

    Brian and Jade are so freaking cute together! and he LOVES her In Love aawe!!
    mama Haner is awesome, though i'm scared to find out how that phone call will turn out, i'm guessing that she's going to call Jade's parents.. tehe
    January 24th, 2018 at 04:36pm