Poison - Comments

@ cruciatus.

Again, thank you so much for this review. I'm actually working on a short prequel for it. And as for the font, I am so sorry. I thought that it would be dark enough. I did go back and make the font darker. Thank you again! You're wonderful!

I would have really loved for this to be a full-length story, because you've got Dean and Bobby down pat. I honestly visualized myself standing in Bobby's house, listening to this conversation. It's written exactly how the writers of the show write the two of them to be. I also really love Eden, and the fact that her nickname is boyish. It would be just like Bobby to give her that kind of nickname. I did find it a little difficult to read on my screen with the font not being dark enough on the background, but this was definitely a brilliantly written piece.