like you said very cliche story, what's the interesting for me is 1. The country setting- personally I am all for the love of nature, so reading this is kind of refreshing especially the scenes where you describe Bailey has calming down or finding peace in nature. So yeah I found something to relate to. 2. I am all for unexpected developments so maybe you will throw us off the cliff at some point hopefully since your story is really running so smoothly. 3. Smooth story, well done. You remind me today that even with twists and turns to come your story will surely end happily and that's really the beautiful thing about cliches. Thank you
October 20th, 2017 at 03:06pm
