That first chapter was AMAZING. What. The. Heck!!! I really wish I had more to say about it, but I'm not the best at these kinds of things. I'm impressed.
January 7th, 2018 at 10:17pm
Fantastic story of what we've read so far. The only criticism the two of us could come up with was the follow:
Adri: The beginning is a tad bit fast paced, throwing you in head first into...freezing water, shall we say. There's nothing wrong with that, but I think I would have preferred to see him wander and explore a bite before encountering the wolf-thing and the ice-man/electric-kid's body.
Angelo thought it might be neat if he encountered the wolf first and then the electric kid killed both the wolf and the M.C....perhaps he could have encountered a pack instead of a single wolf?
Just some thoughts.
We haven't read the whole thing yet, but it's absolutely fantastic thus far.
Angelo: Thumbs up, bro! Hoping to have a published copy o' this in my hands some day! Keep me updated~