Oh my god I love this story so far! I can’t wait for more. Cara and Brian are awesome together (even if it’s just as friends right now). I look forward to more :)
Awww poor cara at the beginning - that moment when you sober up and realise you’ve made a mistake. But she seemed to handle being thrown into the fire with ease. I can see her making friends with the rest of the gang whilst her and Brian get to know each other.
Length of chapters is just right for me ( I’d be happy for longer too but I’m greedy!)
I really enjoyed this update. Thanks for updating so quickly btw. I don’t think the chapter length is too short, no. In fact, if you want to lengthen it, I certainly wouldn’t complain, but if you want to keep it to around 4000 words, that’s ok too.
I just love the way you write Cara and Brian’s characters in this story. It isn’t too rushed and isn’t forced. I’m looking forward to what’ll happen next so please update again soon. Xxx
@ mdcustard I just want you to know I had the next chapter planned long before your comment but I LOVE YOUR COMMENT. Haha. Sorry if chapter 6 seemed predictable.
@ AJ9 Thank you <3 It means so much to me to hear your positive feedback!
Loving this ... and I like the idea of slow and steady. They’re both just out of long term relationships so they need to be single for a while so they can develop their friendship first. Anything else would just fizzle out really quickly.
I’m looking forward to the next chapter. Please update again soon. Xxx