To Fall From the Pedestal - Comments

Okay so I love the first line of this - it's so stark, and it instantly has me have this worry about Cas. Is he okay? I mean he's Cas so probably not but still. Great intro line. I also love the little bit where Cas is envisioning what they'll be doing because 100% I can see them doing that. You've done such a good job of keeping them in character throughout, and the beginning really shows that.

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Man, there are coyotes that don’t care about your friggin… angel-y ass.

THIS LINE IS MY FAVOURITE OKAY? It's just so 'Dean' and I love it so much. It's little things like this that genuinely make the whole thing far better as a piece of writing because I can imagine this whole thing playing out as an episode of the show, and it just adds that little zing of authenticity to it. It plays out really well in my head, and honestly, you've done a great job of keeping it in line with the Dean and Cas that we know.

And the ending was just so cute and basically gorgeous and I'm crying omg. Dean and Cas make such a dysfunctional couple in my head, but it's such a cute ending, honestly. You've done a lovely job here.

I'm not really a Destiel person normally because most stories take the guys way out of character, but this was well written and the guys were kept in character throughout.

The dialogue was on point for both and I like that you've written Dean opening up, admitting his feelings instead of pushing them away like I feel he does a lot! Great job!