Can I just say... When I first started reading the first chapter – I was hooked completely! I loved the character interaction and the narration. I love the way you write. Intriguing, sometimes ominous but definitely captivating. I found myself reading the whole story in one sitting (And is that a sequel I see?). *Runs off to read your other works*
THIS WAS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN AND IF YOU'RE IN HELL THEN I'M AS MAD AS THE MARCH HARE! AHAHAHA but seriously though, this is a very beautiful piece, a bit mysterious and eerie but still adorable and beautiful like always. The imagery and the interactions of the character seem as realistic to me as real people. Thanks for sharing this story with everyone on this site, Gatsby. <3