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  • DestedDreams

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    Please update. Love love
    January 15th, 2019 at 12:35pm
  • Laylylu

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    I love this story!!!
    April 12th, 2018 at 07:29pm
  • rockerxgurlx616

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    Eagerly awaiting an update! I love this story!
    February 13th, 2018 at 09:48am
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    @ foryou666
    Jeeze! I'm so very flattered <3 thank you!!
    February 11th, 2018 at 04:23pm
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    @ will-you-pause
    Ah! I've been so busy with work lately; I'm really hoping I'll have another chapter up soon :)
    February 11th, 2018 at 04:23pm
  • foryou666

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    This is by far my favorite story so far! mind you, I’ve been reading these for fifteen years!
    February 10th, 2018 at 08:00am
  • will-you-pause

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    I love that you update so often! can't wait to see where this goes!
    January 24th, 2018 at 06:09am
  • fictitious love

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    @ line112
    Glad you're loving it! And thank you so much for your feedback :)
    January 23rd, 2018 at 10:24pm
  • line112

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    Love love love this! <3 Ville is adorable! I can't wait to see how their relationship goes, and on that note... i'm really looking forward to your next update
    January 22nd, 2018 at 11:38pm
  • fictitious love

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    @ kdennis9
    No worries, love! I myself am starting a new job this week so hopefully, I can bust out another update soon. Glad to hear you're caught up! I always appreciate your feedback :)
    January 21st, 2018 at 05:07pm
  • kdennis9

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    Well it seems I’m two updates behind! I apologize, I’ve worked a lot this past week. Anyways, I love how openly the women of HIM have embraced Liv! I think it shows how much Ville loves her that they’re that ready and willing. Again, obsessed with your attention to detail <3 incredibly job as always sweets <3
    January 20th, 2018 at 04:54pm
  • fictitious love

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    @ will-you-pause
    Ah, you've definitely got the gears turning in my head! All these ideas I've been tossing around, it's only making it harder to figure out how and when to end it. Your feedback is so appreciated :)
    January 18th, 2018 at 01:08pm
  • will-you-pause

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    @ fictitious love
    Omg well thank you! Lol I thought I was done with fanfics when I finished 'Heartkiller' but I was randomly inspired so ALSN was a bit hastily prepared; glad you still enjoyed it! <3

    Jesse's comment (that it seemed like they had been dating for months) worries me. Like I feel like the media is going to start speculating that Liv is the one who cheated on Jared...

    but I love the brotherly interaction (... until I read the 'competition' line, which makes me think they're going to fight over her...)
    January 17th, 2018 at 02:40am
  • fictitious love

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    @ ProverbofHell
    Glad you're enjoying it! There's still so much more to come - and so much uncertainty to resolve. I appreciate your feedback :)
    January 16th, 2018 at 09:02pm
  • fictitious love

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    @ will-you-pause
    Thank you! Means a lot coming from you! I absolutely loved 'And Love Said No' <3
    January 16th, 2018 at 08:05pm
  • ProverbofHell

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    Love the build -up and Liv's obvious uncertainty of what will happen to them after her "holiday".
    January 16th, 2018 at 12:46pm
  • will-you-pause

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    Loving this!
    January 14th, 2018 at 01:06am
  • fictitious love

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    @ LoveInColdBlood13
    I will keep everyone in the loop and I'll definitely be finishing this story here :)
    January 11th, 2018 at 11:24am
  • LoveInColdBlood13

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    I swear I’m obsessed. If you decide to go to another website please let us know where! I didn’t want this last chapter to end.
    January 11th, 2018 at 06:08am
  • kdennis9

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    Mmmm what a nice way to wake up lol. Great update! I hope the conversation with B doesn’t weigh too heavily on her mind and she can just enjoy Ville <3
    January 11th, 2018 at 02:49am