So, I just stumbled across this, and decided to check it out. :) Wow. This story only has three chapters so far, but I am beyond captivated. You're an amazing writer; you put out decent-sized updates, you pay attention to detail... which I feel a lot of fanfic writing lacks. This only has a few updates so far and I'm already recommending it, if that tells you anything. Usually, I wait until at least ten chapters, but this story already has that quality that I see in an average story's ten chapters. Just... wow. I really hope to see you continue this soon. I'm curious about what happened to Caroline while Alex was gone. Other than losing her parents, it seems like something else pretty traumatic happened to her. :( Or somethings, maybe it was more than one thing. The emotion in this story is so sincere, and I'm so impressed again for how much you've accomplished with so few chapters. Like, the rest of this story is bound to be even more amazing, in that case. Wow, I'm really looking forward to seeing more. Hmm... and a tiny detail I picked up on from the one chapter, that I feel the need to mention: who has Alex's heart? He might have been kidding/a bit dismissive when he was saying that to Zack, but I'm curious to see if that comes to light at all. Hmm... Anyway, yeah, just... wow. I'm so impressed with this story. I hope to see more of it soon. I will definitely be here to leave feedback. :) I'm also surprised that this doesn't have more comments. I mean, I know it's just starting, but the amount of work you already put into it deserves a bit more feedback than just one other person. I'll stop rambling now, lol. But yeah, just wanted to let you know that I'm reading and really enjoying what you have of this. <3 One of the most sincere stories I've read in a minute.
Wow. This story only has three chapters so far, but I am beyond captivated.
You're an amazing writer; you put out decent-sized updates, you pay attention to detail... which I feel a lot of fanfic writing lacks. This only has a few updates so far and I'm already recommending it, if that tells you anything. Usually, I wait until at least ten chapters, but this story already has that quality that I see in an average story's ten chapters. Just... wow.
I really hope to see you continue this soon. I'm curious about what happened to Caroline while Alex was gone. Other than losing her parents, it seems like something else pretty traumatic happened to her. :( Or somethings, maybe it was more than one thing.
The emotion in this story is so sincere, and I'm so impressed again for how much you've accomplished with so few chapters. Like, the rest of this story is bound to be even more amazing, in that case. Wow, I'm really looking forward to seeing more.
Hmm... and a tiny detail I picked up on from the one chapter, that I feel the need to mention: who has Alex's heart? He might have been kidding/a bit dismissive when he was saying that to Zack, but I'm curious to see if that comes to light at all. Hmm...
Anyway, yeah, just... wow. I'm so impressed with this story. I hope to see more of it soon. I will definitely be here to leave feedback. :) I'm also surprised that this doesn't have more comments. I mean, I know it's just starting, but the amount of work you already put into it deserves a bit more feedback than just one other person.
I'll stop rambling now, lol. But yeah, just wanted to let you know that I'm reading and really enjoying what you have of this. <3 One of the most sincere stories I've read in a minute.