Please Come Back - Comments

@ Ghoul Scouts
Thanks

I ended reading this story, sobbing. Wich isn't a bad thing! You captured the raw emotion of abandonment well. The dialogue between the little girl and uncle was super realistic and spot on.
I'm proud of you for writing outside your comfort zone. Great job!

@ floral and fading.
Thank you beautiful, it feels good to step out for a bit!

Well, this whacked me right in the feels. This was really hard hitting and sad and I feel things, job well done Mandy! Really great to see you stepping out of your comfort zone as well