When Night Comes - Comments

  • dawn of light

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    HOLY SHIT
    ANOTHER ATTACK

    I like the fact that this is an easy read! Everything seems to flow nicely, where the readers are able to read this effortlessly! I have to mention that I love the short chapters. We know enough within each chapter, and because of the simplicity of each chapter, you make your audience crave more! SO PLS UPDATE SOON LOL.

    I'm excited to learn more about the creature!! I hope there isn't another attack Sad

    i'm ready for the next one!!
    April 15th, 2018 at 08:15am
  • dawn of light

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    You’ve done this so well because I’m actually a bit creeped out. Oh my god. I can’t wait for an update, though, because I am curious about this creature—thing—myth not sure. ALSO DIGGIN THE LAYOUT AND THE SIMPLE CHAPS tehe
    March 9th, 2018 at 09:02pm
  • dawn of light

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    IM SO READY FOR THIS
    February 28th, 2018 at 07:58pm