Hurt People (Hurt People) - Comments

ho i'm still waiting for this smh

OKAY
1) LOVE LOVE LOVE THE FIRST HALF OKAY
2) VEE IS MAKIN MOVES
3) DID DESI JUST ACCEPT HIS MOVES
4) yes she did

I just really enjoy this okay? The way the characters talk is....how I talk (I’m talking about the “Brooooo” thing ) So I’m just in love with your way of writing things so realistically. And that’s insane because you perfectly capture that nice characteristic of these beautiful people.

I NEED THE NEXT CHAP ALSO
bc I’m ready for that Friday meet up between vee and Desi
^^ I’m also wondering if Desi will bring the gang with her

(eye emoji) Vallor... I mean, it sounds nice but i've never heard of that as a name before.

Dorian hasn't been in the story a whole lot (obvs. it's chapter 2) BUT JEEESUS, I ALREADY DON'T LIKE HIM? back off D;
but then again I like me a boss lady too.

I nearly screamed when Vee stopped singing because he saw the B e a u t y at the bar eyeing him, I had to quickly lock my phone because ??? I COULDN'T HANDLE THAT HAHAHA but seriously the thirst™ in this white boy is real as fuck.

I can't wait for the next chapter!! they're so nice and long, I enjoy it!

omfg why is DESI SO MEAN TO VEE
HE'S TRYIN
but he's also hella white so i feel i feel like w a name like vallor HAHAHAHA i'd do the same thing tbh
omg and I cringed at the ur struggles are his struggles thing too like I don't get it either but shit at least I'm aware y'know
i have also fallen prey to the 'liking a boy bc of his smile' thing and look desi LOOK
YOU CAN'T AVOID IT
SO JUST ACCEPT IT OK thx goodbye

btw I think you should double post and hit me w the next chapter bc I'm a baller and u love me SO

I’m honestly in awe with this chapter. IT IS ONLY THE FIRST ONE TOO SO I CANT WAIT FOR THE STORY TO PROGRESS. Like Callie said, I am already in love with your characters. In this first chapter, we have work life, party life, friendships, potential relationships—WHAT ELSE CAN WE ASK FOR. Also, I say this for all your stories, but I can just feel the real life feelings of these characters because of your writing. It’s clean and realistic—it always amazes me!!

BUT CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE

riding solo and What is they say? Mo bitches, mo problems.
BOI IF YOU DON'T— hahaha omg he's trying too hard i'm crying

I love these characters already, and the chapter was so lovely and long, it's been a while since I've read a long chapter on Mibba! WOO. LET'S DO THIS!

OH IM EXCITED

I'm excited

biiiiiiiiiiiitch you know I'm keen for this
sidenote is that TIMOTHE