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  • kvxdelta

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    Yeah, I just used Venus as a metaphor for the condition of his and her relationship. Everything is symbolic pretty much. Thank you for the compliments. I appreciate your feedback. :)
    March 11th, 2018 at 10:40am
  • Sids21

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    Very good piece of writing and I can see that you've added characteristics of poetry into the story quite nicely with Venus. Just one question though: The story is taking place on earth right? I think it is but not completely sure.
    March 11th, 2018 at 09:43am
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